selfportrait with 15

Drawing \ Figure | 04/02/06 @962 | Pirotess | critiques (8) | views (858)

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I draw this with pencils as I was 15 for a friend... He knew that I love to draw, so he doesn't want a photo but a drawing of myself...

I know there are some mistakes but sorry i was 8 years ago, so... don't care anymore

Now I work on a new painting with a tablett... but first I have to learn how it works >_>

c & c are really welcome anyway ^_^ thx

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Comments (8)

deandude

04/02/06 @990

excellent drawing...left eye seems off, but still very well done +8/9

Stormkrow

04/02/06 @037

I like it... Looking forward to seeing some of your recent works.
Thanks for sharing

Marl1

04/02/06 @400

it's looking good, I have some crits but they're not very usefull for this is something you made 8 years ago.. But I'm still going to tell you the crits, just in case you didn't know them

Try not to draw a lot of thin lines and call it hair, divide the hair up into parts and locks and define higlights and shadows, so it will look more alive and real.
The mouth looks great, but try not to use outlines for it.
Try not to smudge too much, it looks like you smudged a lot to create shadows, but you can also do that with small light strokes of your pencil and a kneeded eraser, and maybe a tortillion. But do not overdo the smudging, use lines over the smudged areas to create some texture also.

love
Marleen

bakatron

04/03/06 @429

i bet the boys were all over you when you were 15.

venomsblood

04/03/06 @465

nice

very nice

well done

Pirotess

04/03/06 @941

thank you all ^_^ next painting follows in the next few days... and this time a new one

@bakatron: you haven't see me today

thx

@Marl1: thank you for telling me your crits... I already said, that I know there are some mistakes, but it's better to know the opinions of others too

DreamShadow

05/14/06 @693

very nice

keep up the good work

MIROART

09/30/06 @274

try adding more values, every shade from black to white, this will make your drawing pop. Nice progress for now.

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